Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面內(nèi)容, 按照要求寫一封書信。

Despite being asked to stay safe during the outbreak(爆發(fā)) of the novel coronavirus(新型冠狀病毒), students and teachers across the country can keep themselves busy with classes online. A student used a mobile phone to attend an online class at home in the Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region in April. His home was recently connected to the Internet.
DingTalk, a virtual workplace developed by Alibaba Group, held online classes for about 50 million students nationwide, from primary to high school level. Physics teacher Zhao Chuanliang gave an online class to his students at Henan Experimental Middle School in Zhengzhou on Sunday.

（寫作內(nèi)容）假設(shè)你是李華，按照要求，用英語(yǔ)給英語(yǔ)老師寫一封信，匯報(bào)今年寒假期間的網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程學(xué)習(xí)情況，內(nèi)容包括:

1.你和同學(xué)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程期間的真實(shí)表現(xiàn)，包括上課與平時(shí)作息等；

2.寒假網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程期間父母如何關(guān)心你的學(xué)習(xí)； 3.這次網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程給你的感受。

（寫作要求） 1.詞數(shù)為120左右，寫三段；

2.書信開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句，作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)） 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to report my online lessons.

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am writing to report my online lessons.

From Monday through Friday, I got up at seven and logged onto DingTalk to attend online lessons. I was active in communicating with teachers, for they couldn’t see me online. Some of my classmates, though, paid little attention to courses, busy chatting or posting messages or clicking likes during live-streaming lessons.

My parents were under pressure as they wanted to monitor me at home to ensure I was not distracted by games while attending online classes. Now I am at school and their life is back to normal.

Online courses are as effective as face-to-face lessons at school. For me, every minute of the online courses counts, since the national college entrance examination, determining which university I can attend, may have lifelong consequences.

Thank you for reading my letter. Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于讀寫任務(wù)，要求考生寫一封匯報(bào)，說明今年寒假期間的網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程學(xué)習(xí)情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指先點(diǎn)出寫信目的，再逐點(diǎn)進(jìn)行匯報(bào)。

要求：

1.寫信目的

2.網(wǎng)課期間自己和同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)

3.父母對(duì)自己學(xué)習(xí)的關(guān)心

4.自己的感受

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

log onto，online lessons，be active in, pay little attention to, busy doing sth, under pressure, distract, back to normal, effective, face-to-face lessons, national college entrance examination, consequence

第三步：連詞成句

1. I got up at seven and logged onto DingTalk to attend online lessons

2. I was active in communicating with teachers…

3. Some of my classmates, though, paid little attention to courses, busy chatting…

4. My parents were under pressure as they wanted to monitor me at home to ensure I was not distracted by games while attending online classes.

5. their life is back to normal…

6. Online courses are as effective as face-to-face lessons at school.

7. since the national college entrance examination, determining which university I can attend, may have lifelong consequences

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改