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2．假定你是李華，你所在的城市為了治理交通堵塞的問題，推出了公共自行車租借活動，得到人們認可，但是因為種種原因，真正租借的人很少．針對這一情況，請用英語給主管部門寫一封信，提出改進措施．
1．簡化租借程序，方便為主．
2．多修自行車專用道路．
3．號召人們保護環(huán)境．
生詞：過程，程序  process  n．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am glad to find that more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent．
                                                                                   
Thank you for considering my suggestion．Look forward to seeing more and more people travel by bicycle．
                                                           Yours                                                
  Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封英語書信．寫作要點包括：1．簡化租借程序，方便為主．2．多修自行車專用道路．3．號召人們保護環(huán)境．寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重點詞匯：provide（提供）；first of all（首先）；for example（例如）；simplify （簡化）；so that （以便）；convenient（方便的）；traffic jam（交通擁擠，交通堵塞）；call on sb to do sth（號召某人做某事）
高分句型：1．For example，simplify the renting process ①so that people will find ②it convenient to do so．
                 so that 引導(dǎo)一個目的狀語從句；②it作形式賓語，真正的賓語是后面的不定式短語to do so．
                 2．Finally，I think we should call on people ①to protect the environment，②for riding a bicycle is definitely environmentally friendly．
                 ①不定式短語在句中做目的狀語；②介詞短語在句中表原因．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I am glad to find that more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent．However，few people would like to rent a bicycle because it is not easy to rent one．So I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve the situation．
First of all，you should make it easy for people to rent a bicycle．For example，simplify the renting process so that people will find it convenient to do so（高分句型一）．Second，more bicycles-only roads should be built to make sure that cyclists can't be caught in a traffic jam．Finally，I think we should call on people to protect the environment，for riding a bicycle is definitely environmentally friendly（高分句型二）．
Thank you for considering my suggestion．Look forward to seeing more and more people travel by bicycle．
                                                               Yours
Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意要點的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．