10.中國(guó)女藥學(xué)家屠呦呦在2015年獲得了諾貝爾醫(yī)學(xué)獎(jiǎng),是所有中國(guó)人值得驕傲的一件事.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示介紹屠呦呦的故事.內(nèi)容包括:
1、屠呦呦,女,藥學(xué)家.1930年12月30日生于浙江寧波.1951年考入北京醫(yī)科大學(xué).畢業(yè)后,她投入到治療瘧疾的研究中.
2、因?yàn)榘l(fā)現(xiàn)了青蒿素,她在2015年獲得了諾貝爾醫(yī)學(xué)獎(jiǎng).
3、你對(duì)屠呦呦的評(píng)價(jià).
注意:1.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
參考詞匯:藥學(xué)家 Pharmacologist
瘧疾 malaria
青蒿素 artemisinin
諾貝爾醫(yī)學(xué)獎(jiǎng) Nobel Prize in medicine.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類人物介紹作文,根據(jù)提示信息來寫一篇介紹屠呦呦的作文,要注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、屠呦呦,女,藥學(xué)家.1930年12月30日生于浙江寧波.1951年考入北京醫(yī)科大學(xué).畢業(yè)后,她投入到治療瘧疾的研究中.2、因?yàn)榘l(fā)現(xiàn)了青蒿素,她在2015年獲得了諾貝爾醫(yī)學(xué)獎(jiǎng).3、你對(duì)屠呦呦的評(píng)價(jià),不能脫離題目要求;4.注意時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)和詞匯的用法;5.適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)句式,詞匯要多變,給文章增色.
   亮點(diǎn)說明  本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,描寫細(xì)致到位,而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu),有一些高級(jí)句式,如a great pharmacologist of my country與the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine運(yùn)用插入語的手法,With hard work and determination,she discovered artemisinin,which is of great significance for curing malaria.運(yùn)用定語從句.詞匯短語豐富多變?nèi)鏱e proud of 以某人為榮,be devoted to 獻(xiàn)身于

解答 Tu Youyou,a great pharmacologist of my country,was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize in Medicine for her discovery of artemisinin.(高分句型)
    Born in Ningbo,Zhejiang Province on December 30th in 1930,she was admitted into Beijing Medical College in 1951.After graduation,she devoted all her efforts to the research in treating malaria.With hard work and determination,she discovered artemisinin,which is of great significance for curing malaria.(高分句型)
Tu Youyou,the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine,is hard-working and modest.(高分句型)Her discovery is seen as a big contribution to the human health.All our Chinese are proud of her.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫,比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞,使文章流暢、通順,并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感.(1)認(rèn)真審題,確定體裁. (2)構(gòu)思要點(diǎn).根據(jù)題目要求,理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn).設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落,考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等,把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來,構(gòu)成文章框架.(3)選詞造句,避難選易.(4)認(rèn)真檢查,避免錯(cuò)誤.仔細(xì)閱讀全文,查找是否有錯(cuò),注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤,句式是否正確.邏輯是否一致.

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