Question

【題目】假定你是李華，本周日你爸爸計劃組織一場家庭聚會。請你寫封郵件給外教Steven，遨請他來你家一起參加。主要內(nèi)容如下：

1. 聚會時間和地點；

2. 聚會人員介紹；

3. 其他注意事項。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Steven,

I'm writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steven，

I’m writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday. The party will begin at 5:00 pm in my home. There will be many people to show up in the party, including my parents and my sister. The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face. The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister. All of them can’t wait to see you.

There are other things I want to tell you. Firstly, you should take a No. 218 bus to go to my home. Secondly, I hope you can tell me the food you like, and in that case, I can prepare it better. I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇電子郵件，假定你是李華，本周日你爸爸計劃組織一場家庭聚會。請你寫封郵件給外教Steven，邀請他來你家一起參加。主要內(nèi)容如下：聚會時間和地點；聚會人員介紹；其他注意事項。寫作時認真閱讀前面的提示，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇電子郵件，格式正確，語句精煉，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，文中使用高級句子。There will be many people to show up in the party, including my parents and my sister.句中including運用恰到好處；The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face.句中who引導(dǎo)定語從句；另外，takes charge of，can’t wait to see，F(xiàn)irstly, looking forward to等的運用為文章增色添彩。