Question

【題目】假定你是李華。在你生日到來之際你收到了美國朋友彼得寄來的禮物——一本暢銷的英文小說。請給他回信，要點如下：

1.小說收到；2.回贈一份小禮物；3.小禮物的意義；4.邀請來華。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive the novel. Thank you for such a lovely birthday gift as I have been expecting it for a long time. This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life.

I know you’re interested in Chinese festivals, and therefore I have chosen an album of paper cutting for you. Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics, which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere. I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China.

Best wishes. Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封回信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封回信；在你生日到來之際你收到了美國朋友彼得寄來的禮物一本暢銷的英文小說，用英語給他寫一封回信，告訴他小說收到了，同時回贈一份小禮物，并解釋禮物的意義和邀請他來中國；本文時態(tài)應(yīng)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱主要使用第一人稱。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：receive（收到），novel（小說）birthday gift（生日禮物），insight（見識），paper cutting（剪紙），Chinese cultural relics（中國文化遺產(chǎn)）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，行文流暢。作者在范文中使用了較多復(fù)合句，原因狀語從句：Thank you for such a lovely birthday gift as I have been expecting it for a long time.；定語從句：Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics, which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere.；方式狀語從句：I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China.。這些體現(xiàn)了作者較高的語言運用能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。