Question

8．假定你是孝華，你的外國好友Tom來信說他下周將參加中文演講比賽（Chinese speech contest）．為此他感到非常緊張．請給他寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示支持和鼓勵；2．給出演講建議；3．預祝成功．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm very glad that you'll take part in the Chinese speech contest next week，through which you can improveyour Chinese communication ability．（高分句型一）So you should take the opportunity and face it calmly．
Now I'd like to give you some suggestions．Firstly，when you stand on the platform，take it easy，as theChinese saying goes，"a good state of mind is half done．"（高分句型二）What's more，keep smiling from the start and payattention to your hand gestures as body language is especially important in the speech．（高分句型三）Finally，your voiceshould remain clear and loud to reach the audience．
I believe you can make it and wish you good luck and success．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假定你是孝華，你的外國好友Tom來信說他下周將參加中文演講比賽（Chinese speech contest）．為此他感到非常緊張．請給他寫封回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：表示支持和鼓勵；給出演講建議；預祝成功．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：take part in 參加；Firstly首先；take it easy別著急；as the Chinese saying goes正如諺語所說；What's more而且；pay attention to 關(guān)注；Finally最后；make it 成功；
 I'm very glad that you'll take part in the Chinese speech contest next week，through which you can improve your Chinese communication ability．（高分句型一）
Firstly，when you stand on the platform，take it easy，as the Chinese saying goes，"a good state of mind is half done．"（高分句型二）
What's more，keep smiling from the start and pay attention to your hand gestures as body language is especially important in the speech．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm very glad that you'll take part in the Chinese speech contest next week，through which you can improve your Chinese communication ability．（高分句型一）So you should take the opportunity and face it calmly．
       Now I'd like to give you some suggestions．Firstly，when you stand on the platform，take it easy，as the Chinese saying goes，"a good state of mind is half done．"（高分句型二）What's more，keep smiling from the start and pay attention to your hand gestures as body language is especially important in the speech．（高分句型三）Finally，your voice should remain clear and loud to reach the audience．
       I believe you can make it and wish you good luck and success．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．