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3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
   增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
   刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
   修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
   注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分；
     3．錯誤類型不涉及單詞拼寫．
Dear Brown，
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it．How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river．It is so a beautiful place!We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents，that is very exciting．You usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun．I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience．If you show much interests in it，reply to me soon．

Answer 1

分析 作者去年在國際兒童夏令營做了一份兼職工作，作者認(rèn)為這項工作很有趣，是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，所以當(dāng)知道今年還需要一名工作人員時就寫信給Brown，建議Brown加入．

解答 Dear Brown，
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it．How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river．It is so a beautiful place!We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents，thatis very exciting．You usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time∧visit the area and have a fun．I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience．If you show much interestsin it，reply to me soon．
詳解：
1．take改為took；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文是記錄過去發(fā)生的事情，故使用過去時．
2．to改為for；考慮介詞，be fit for是固定短語，意為"適合…"
3．join改為joining；考查非謂語動詞，about是介詞，后面接動名詞．
4．so改為such；考查語法知識，so后面接的是名詞短語，所以用such．
5．happy改為happily；考查副詞，此處用副詞作形容詞修飾動詞．
6．that改為which；考查關(guān)系代詞，分析句子可知這是非限制性定語從句，不能用that引導(dǎo)．
7．You改為We；考查人稱代詞，根據(jù)上下文可知是"我們通�！�"，故用代詞we．
8．visit前面加to；考查動詞不定式，此處用不定式短語表示目的．
9．去掉a；考查冠詞，fun是不可數(shù)名詞，前面不能用不定冠詞a．
10．interests改為interest；考查名詞，interest作為"興趣"講是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用復(fù)數(shù)形式．

點評 短文改錯首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時態(tài)，再運用語法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語等基礎(chǔ)知識進一步分析各個句子，找出文中的錯誤加以修改．