Question

13．假如你是紅星中學業(yè)高三一班的學生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為"A Volunteer Day"的英文稿件．請根據(jù)以下四幅圖所提供的情景，敘述去年12月5日（The International Volunteer Day）你班志愿者日活動的完整過程．
    注意：
    1．短文的開頭已為你寫好．
    2．詞數(shù)不少于60．
    提示詞語：patrol vt．巡視   trim vt．修整

    Last December 5^th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day．We decided to spend the day doing something for our school instead of having classes．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇看圖寫作，一共四幅圖．做題時：1．認真讀圖，可知四幅圖講述的是你班志愿者日活動的完整過程．2．初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)．3．連詞成句，然后再連句成文．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容．4．反復審核，修改錯誤．5．注意所給的漢語提示．一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關的時間、地點、人物等相關的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息．在把握了文章的中心后，應在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容． 
亮點句型一：At the beginning of the first class in the morning，we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do．在早上第一節(jié)課開始的時候，我們聚集在教室里，班長告訴我們該怎么辦．這句話用了賓語從句 what we would do做told的賓語．what在賓語從句中做do的賓語．
 亮點句型二：Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order．第4組在實驗室工作，在那里他們清洗試管，并把他們在良好的秩序．這句話用了定語從句，先行詞是lab在定語從句 they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order中做地點狀語，所以用關系副詞where引導．
亮點句型三：Having got the work done，we all felt a sense of achievement．做完工作后，我們都有成就感．這句話用了非謂語動詞Having got the work done．

解答 Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day．We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes．
      At the beginning of the first class in the morning，we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do．（亮點句型一）As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately．I was in Group 1．My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school．We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school．The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants．Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush．The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes．They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces．Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order．（亮點句型二）Having got the work done，we all felt a sense of achievement．（亮點句型三）At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day．【描述活動過程】
      What a valuable experience I had in the high school!I'll remember it forever．

點評 寫作看圖作文時，首先認真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點，合理想象，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達連貫．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型