Question

1．假如你是李華，你校正在開(kāi)展安全教育，圍繞"中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)去學(xué)校"進(jìn)行討論，請(qǐng)給校報(bào)英文版編輯寫(xiě)一封信，介紹討論情況并發(fā)表自己的意見(jiàn)．
1．大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為：可方便與家長(zhǎng)、同學(xué)聯(lián)系；是一種時(shí)尚．
2．大多數(shù)老師認(rèn)為：中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控；用手機(jī)玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；容易引起攀比； 使用校園內(nèi)公用電話．
3．你的觀點(diǎn)及看法．
注意：1．信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
2．詞數(shù)：100左右，
參考詞匯：攀比：vie with sb．在校園內(nèi)：on the campus
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school．
           ．
Yous
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇討論現(xiàn)狀的議論文，所以用第一和第三人稱展開(kāi)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，內(nèi)容主要包括：一 點(diǎn)明主題；二 大多數(shù)同學(xué)的看法；三  大多數(shù)老師的看法；四自己的觀點(diǎn)及看法．
高分句型：
1．The majority of the students think that（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句） it（it代指后面的動(dòng)詞不定式，做賓語(yǔ)從句的形式主語(yǔ)） is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句） they have a mobile phone．
多少學(xué)生認(rèn)為，如果他們有手機(jī)，那么和父母同學(xué)聯(lián)系會(huì)很方便．
2．If necessary they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus．句子中If necessary=If it is necessary 表示"如果必要"．
如果必要他們可以用校園的公用電話來(lái)打電話．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school．（點(diǎn)明主題）
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone．【高分句型一】And what's more，it's a fashion．（大多數(shù)同學(xué)的看法）
However，most teachers think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves．It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone．And it's easy to cause the students to vie with each other．If necessary they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus．【高分句型二】（大多數(shù)老師的看法）
In my opinion，following the fashion is understandable．But as middle school students，we should put all our heart into our studies．（自己的觀點(diǎn)及看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
雖然提綱類作文一般給出不少要點(diǎn)，但是，相同的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)也可用不同方式表達(dá)，所以我們要在平時(shí)積累一些同義異構(gòu)的句式或單詞和短語(yǔ)，從而在寫(xiě)作時(shí)能夠運(yùn)用不同而且新穎的句式表達(dá)，那么我們肯定能得到高分．