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14．臨近期末，高一同學(xué)即將面臨著文理分科的選擇．假定你是李華，你同學(xué)Lucy給你來信說到了她對文理科選擇的困擾和焦慮．請你給她回信，安撫她的情緒并提出你的看法和建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右； 書信開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．內(nèi)容要點：
①安撫她的情緒，勸她不必過于糾結(jié)；
②提出參考意見：認清自己興趣和優(yōu)勢，不盲從他人；向高年級的同學(xué)請教 …
③提出看法：無論作何選擇都要努力才能實現(xiàn)自己的期望．
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
可能用到的詞匯：焦慮anxiety；理性地 rationally；不辜負 live up to 盲目地 blindly
Dear Lucy，
I'm sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science．Actually，many senior 1 students have the same anxiety and problem as you．But if we can deal with them rationally，there is nothing to worry about．（高分句型一）
When it comes to choosing between arts and science，the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths．（高分句型二）Never follow others blindly!Besides，it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students，who have previous experience and lesson．（高分句型三）Finally，whichever we choose，please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expectation and choice．（高分句型四）
I hope my ideas can help you．Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息臨近期末，高一同學(xué)即將面臨著文理分科的選擇．假定你是李華，你同學(xué)Lucy給你來信說到了她對文理科選擇的困擾和焦慮．請你給她回信，安撫她的情緒并提出你的看法和建議，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：①安撫她的情緒，勸她不必過于糾結(jié)；②提出參考意見：認清自己興趣和優(yōu)勢，不盲從他人；向高年級的同學(xué)請教 …③提出看法：無論作何選擇都要努力才能實現(xiàn)自己的期望．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Actually事實上；deal with應(yīng)對，處理；When it comes to當(dāng)談到；Finally最后； keep it in mind that 牢記；live up to 不辜負；
But if we can deal with them rationally，there is nothing to worry about．（高分句型一）
When it comes to choosing between arts and science，the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths．（高分句型二）
Besides，it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students，who have previous experience and lesson．（高分句型三）
Finally，whichever we choose，please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expectation and choice．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Lucy，
       I'm sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science．Actually，many senior 1 students have the same anxiety and problem as you．But if we can deal with them rationally，there is nothing to worry about．（高分句型一）
      When it comes to choosing between arts and science，the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths．（高分句型二）Never follow others blindly!Besides，it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students，who have previous experience and lesson．（高分句型三）Finally，whichever we choose，please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expectation and choice．（高分句型四）
       I hope my ideas can help you．Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．