Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray(流浪) dog, until he came to me.

I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.

It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.

There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.

It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?

I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.

The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. “Shall we keep him with us?” I questioned my mom.

Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.

Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.

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Days passed on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very exhausted.

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Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.

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Answer 1

【答案】Days passed on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very exhausted. He came to my room and sat near me. It was then that I saw his hind leg was injured and was bleeding. I called out my mother and she quickly tied a bandage around his leg and gave him food to eat. I was very upset. But the next day, Spotty was up to his usual pranks though he limped a bit. After this incident my relation with Spotty became more intense. I really admired him a lot for his courage.

Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. We came out and saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere. After some time Spotty became quiet. I patted him on his back and came inside. The next day morning, my heart skipped a beat when I didn’t see Spotty. I searched for him in each and every corner but he was nowhere. And this time he had gone and would never come back. I cried and waited for him. We waited for one long week. But there were no signs of him. Then one day my Dad got transferred to Mumbai. We shifted back to Mumbai. What would have happened to Spotty? Would he have died? These were the only questions in my mind, but they all remained unanswered forever.

【解析】

這是一道任務(wù)型作文，要求考生根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

根據(jù)題目要求和內(nèi)容要點，首先要求考生根據(jù)所給的材料，對材料的內(nèi)容進行閱讀，然后續(xù)寫短文，而且字數(shù)限制在150字左右。因此，考生首先必須通讀全文，對文章的大意進行了解。續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容分為兩段。第一段根據(jù)所給語境Days passed on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very exhausted.“日子一天天過去，一天晚上，斯波蒂走了很長一段路回來時，顯得筋疲力盡”展開想象，續(xù)寫一個與小狗斯波蒂之間的故事；第二段根據(jù)所給語境Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.“大約一年后的一個午夜，我們聽到斯波蒂上氣不接下氣地叫著”，再結(jié)合本文開頭的Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes.（雖然這是我今天生命中已經(jīng)消逝的記憶之一，但有些時候我仍然清晰地記得他的臉，尤其是他的眼睛）可推知，作者在回憶他和小狗之間的往事，本段可以圍繞狗狗在作者家失蹤了展開寫作。在寫作過程中，考生要始終緊扣所給的短文的內(nèi)容進行寫作，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性。同時為了提高作文檔次，還要靈活使用一些自己熟悉的高級詞句。