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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last Sunday morning, I was having a walk in the park near my home while I came across some people making a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it. Unfortunate, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building. He were right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with her, but also he signed his name on my shirt!

Answer 1

【答案】①while→when；②actor→actors；③but→and/so；④Unfortunate→Unfortunately；⑤everywhere→anywhere；⑥out后加of；⑦were→was；⑧front前面的the去掉；⑨had→have；⑩her→him
【解析】本文敘述了作者在公園里散步時偶然遇到在這里拍電影的劇組，正好有自己最喜歡的演員，作者想和他合影，于是就回家拿來了相機。最后這位演員不僅給他合影，而且還給他在襯衫上簽了名字。
①while→when 此處并不表示動作的持續(xù)性，故將while改為when。
②actor→actors 考查名詞。one of +名詞的復數(shù)，故用actors。
③but→and/so 考查連詞。句意：我那時沒有隨身帶相機，所以我趕緊跑回家去拿。but表示轉折；so表示前因后果，and表示并列。因為這里前后關系可以看成順承也可看成因果，故用so或and。
④Unfortunate→Unfortunately 此處用副詞作狀語修飾整個句子，故Unfortunate改為Unfortunately。
⑤everywhere→anywhere 考查代詞。everywhere表示每一個地方；anywhere用于否定句，表示任何地方。
⑥out后加of 考查固定短語。walk out of a building從樓里走出來。
⑦were→was 考查主謂一致。he是單數(shù)，故were改為was。
⑧front前面的the去掉 考查固定短語。in the front of在某物的前面（指內部）；in front of在某物的前面（指外部），這里表示在某人的前面，故去掉the。
⑨had→have 考查動詞。not only ...but also放在句首時not only后的句子用倒裝，因為前面已經有助動詞did，故后面用動詞原形have。
⑩her→him 考查代詞。那個演員是男的，故her改為him。