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【題目】假定你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校要征集一封英文感謝信，以致意奮戰(zhàn)在抗擊新型冠狀病毒肺炎第一線的醫(yī)護(hù)人員，請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信用于投稿。

1. 表達(dá)謝意； 2. 個人感受； 3. 表達(dá)信心。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

參考詞匯：流行病epidemic 疫情 epidemic situation 新型冠狀病毒 novel corona virus

Dear Medical workers，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Medical workers,

I am Li Hua from ZZFL school. On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel corona virus.

In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all admiration and love!

Such few words can't fully convey our thankfulness for your irreplaceable contribution. I believe with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

Good luck and stay well!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，感謝奮戰(zhàn)在抗擊新型冠狀病毒肺炎第一線的醫(yī)護(hù)人員。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達(dá)感謝

2.個人感受

1）無私的精神。（selfless spirit）

2）增強(qiáng)我們的打敗這個流行病的信心。（build up our confidence to defeat the epidemic）

3) 崇拜他們。（admire them）

3. 表達(dá)信心。(win the battle and make a quick recovery)

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

On behalf of; devotion and sacrifice; regardless of; the shortage of; desperately; struggling for; shed light on; build up; deserve; convey; irreplaceable contribution; joint efforts.

第三步：連詞成句

1. On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you for your devotion and sacrifice.

2. regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection

3. You have shed new light on the virus.

4. You build up our confidence to defeat it.

5. You deserve all admiration and love.

6. Such few words can't fully convey our thankfulness for your irreplaceable contribution.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改