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8．最近，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)校成立了名為"起床俱樂(lè)部"的協(xié)會(huì)，來(lái)鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生早起床．為此，你校學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)起了討論．請(qǐng)按要求寫(xiě)一篇英文報(bào)道．
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

討論話題	我校是否要成立"起床俱樂(lè)部"
時(shí)間	上周一
地點(diǎn)	學(xué)校會(huì)議室
討論范圍	高一、高二學(xué)生代表120人
討論結(jié)果	67人贊成；理由：培養(yǎng)良好生活習(xí)慣，利用好早上的時(shí)間． 48人反對(duì)；理由：是否早起是個(gè)人習(xí)慣，不需要強(qiáng)求． 其余：個(gè)人可以按照自己的意愿和方式．

【寫(xiě)作要求】
只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
參考詞匯：起床俱樂(lè)部  Getting Up Club．
Recently，more and moreschools have set up special organizations called"Waking Up Club"to encouragestudents to get up early in the morning．A discussion concerning setting up asimilar association in our school was organized by the Student Union in themeeting room last Monday.120 students from Senior One and Senior Twoparticipated in it，of whom 67 approve of it because they believe it will getthem to develop good habits and make full use of the morning time．However，48students don't think it a good idea for the reason that whether to get up earlydepends on one's habit and there is no need to force them to do so．As for therest of the students，they insist that everyone should follow their own wishesand their own lifestyles．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，介紹學(xué)生就"學(xué)校成立‘起床俱樂(lè)部'協(xié)會(huì)來(lái)鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生早起床"進(jìn)行討論的情況．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．討論話題；2．時(shí)間；3．地點(diǎn)；4．討論范圍，5．討論結(jié)果． 既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：set up （建立），encourage sb to do sth（鼓勵(lì)某人做某事），participate in （參加），approve of （贊成），develop good habits （培養(yǎng)好習(xí)慣），depend on （取決于），force sb to do（迫使某人做某事），as for（至于，關(guān)于）．
【高分句型】
1.120 students from Senior One and Senior Two participated in it，of whom 67 approve of it because they believe it will get them to develop good habits and make full use of the morning time．
這里是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，從句中為"介詞+關(guān)系代詞"，"數(shù)詞+of+whom"．
2.48 students don't think ①it a good idea for the reason ②that whether to get up early depends on one's habit and there is no need to force them to do so．
①這里是賓語(yǔ)從句省略了連接詞that，動(dòng)詞 think的賓語(yǔ)為it a good idea for the reason that whether to get up early depends on one's habit．
②這里是that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句，從句中的主語(yǔ)為whether to get up early，從句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為depends on，賓語(yǔ)為one's habit．"There is no need to do sth"意為沒(méi)有必要做某事．

解答 Recently，more and moreschools have set up special organizations called"Waking Up Club"to encouragestudents to get up early in the morning．A discussion concerning setting up asimilar association in our school was organized by the Student Union in themeeting room last Monday．（討論話題、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）120 students fromSenior One and Senior Two participated in it，（討論范圍） of whom 67 approveof it because they believe it will get them to develop good habits and makefull use of the morning time．【高分句型】However，48 students don'tthink it a good idea for the reason that whether to get up early depends onone's habit and there is no need to force them to do so．【高分句型】As for the rest ofthe students，they insist that everyone should follow their own wishes andtheir own lifestyles．【高分句型】（ 討論結(jié)果）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．