Question

【題目】高中畢業(yè)臨近，高三年級同學想給學校送一件禮物，以表達你們對學校培養(yǎng)和教育的感激之情。請你以學生會的名義向高三同學用英語寫一份倡議書，倡導(dǎo)學生種植一棵紀念樹。主要內(nèi)容如下：

1. 你的建議；

2. 說明這樣做的意義；

3. 提出倡議。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 倡議書的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

Hello, every Senior Three student,

We are going to graduate from our school soon.

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Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, every Senior Three student,

We are going to graduate from our school soon. We have studied here for three years and we all regard it as our second home. We have planned to deliver a gift to our school. What about planting some trees?

Based on what we all know, trees can clean the air, which absorb carbon dioxide and give out oxygen, and made our school more beautiful. Years later, when we come back to visit our school, the trees we are going to plant will grow up and remind us of the time when we studied in school.

So we think trees are the best gifts not only for our school but also for us. Let’s start now!

Student Union

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一份倡議書。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一份倡議書：高中畢業(yè)臨近,高三年級同學想給學校送一件禮物,以表達你們對學校培養(yǎng)和教育的感 激之情。請你以學生會的名義向高三同學用英語寫一份倡議書,倡導(dǎo)學生種植一棵紀念樹。 主要內(nèi)容如下:1 .你的建議；2.說明這樣做的意義；3.提出倡議。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：granuate from our school（從我們學校畢業(yè)）；What about planting some trees?（覺得種樹怎么樣）；Based on what we all know（以我們都知道的為基礎(chǔ)）；remind us of the time（提醒我們時間）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。