Question

【題目】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Mr. Dyson,

I would like apply to become an assistant in your company.

I will expect to get an Master’s degree in mechanical engineering from BeijingUniversity in 2016. In the past few years, I had got experience in designing new project.

I worked in my holidays for a company designed engines for jeeps. I helped their design several parts of the new engine, it made me think I would like to work in a real inventor’s company.

I would be grateful when you would consider employ me in your company.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Xue

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】would like后加to

【2】will去掉

【3】an→a

【4】had→have

【5】project→projects

【6】designed→designing或在designed前加that或which

【7】their→them

【8】it→which或在it前加and

【9】when→if

【10】employ→employing

【解析】

【1】在like后加to�？疾榱�(xí)慣表達。“喜歡做某事”用would like to do sth.。

【2】去掉will�？疾闀r態(tài)。“期盼”發(fā)生在“現(xiàn)在”，故用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【3】an→a 考查冠詞。master的詞首發(fā)音是輔音，故用a。

【4】had→have 考查動詞時態(tài)。由前面時間狀語in the past few years可知用現(xiàn)在完成時。

【5】project→projects 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。

【6】designed→designing或在designed前加that或which�？疾榉侵^語動詞作定語或定語從句。這里a company與design是主動關(guān)系。

【7】their→them考查代詞。這里是作賓語，故用人稱代詞賓格them而不是物主代詞their。

【8】it→which考查句法。這里it前是逗號，逗號不能連接兩個句子，故用which引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指前面整個句子。

【9】when→if考查連詞引導(dǎo)狀語從句。句意：如果您考慮雇傭我在你們公司工作我將不勝感激。

【10】employ→employing 考查非謂語動詞。“考慮做某事”用consider doing…。