Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之問(wèn)交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last week, our yearly school sports meeting is held and the students of our class took an active part in it. On the first day, we watched the impressive opening ceremony performing by energetic teachers and students. Soon, the games formally began. Some of my classmate ran to the track to cheer for the athletes while others remained seated, watching them from a distance. I was exciting because they would compete in the 100-meter dash with my classmates cheering. Fortunately, I fell on the ground, missing the chance to win. What a pity! Although I failed, but I was still looking forward a better performance the next day. However, as the result of the rain, we had to put off the sports meeting, that made us disappointed.

Answer 1

【答案】1. is was;

2. performing performed;

3. classmate classmates;

4. exciting excited;

5. they I;

6. Fortunately Unfortunately;

7.去掉but;

8. looking forward后加to;

9. as the result of中the a；

10. that which (或在that前加and)

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。作者講述了自己參加一年一度的學(xué)校運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的故事。

1． 考查時(shí)態(tài)。句中時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)是Last week，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將is改為was。

2． 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。opening ceremony后的非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做定語(yǔ)修飾它，它是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的邏輯主語(yǔ)，與非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以要用V-ed形式，故將performing 改為 performed。

3． 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。some 說(shuō)明“我”的同學(xué)不止一個(gè)，所以要用classmate的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將classmate 改為 classmates。

4． 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。was后的表語(yǔ)用V-ed形式來(lái)表示主語(yǔ)I的心理感覺(jué)或所處的狀態(tài)，句中主語(yǔ)I為人，故將exciting 改為 excited。

5． 考查代詞。下文 I fell on the ground, missing the chance to win.，可以看出是“我”參加的100百米徑賽，故將they改為I。

6． 考查副詞。I fell on the ground, missing the chance to win.，我摔倒了，當(dāng)然是不幸地，故將Fortunately 改為 Unfortunately

7． 考查連詞。although不能與but連用，故將but去掉。

8． 考查固定短語(yǔ)。look forward to 意為期待，是固定短語(yǔ)，故在looking forward后加to。

9． 考查固定短語(yǔ)。as a result of意為由于……結(jié)果，是固定用法，故將as the result of中the 改為a。

10. 考查定語(yǔ)從句或并列句。逗號(hào)前 we had to put off the sports meeting，主謂賓組成了完整的句子，逗號(hào)后可以是并列句或是從句，如果是從句為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面整個(gè)主句，關(guān)系代詞要用which，如果是并列句，需要加上并列連詞，故將that 改為which (或在that前加and)。