Question

【題目】假如你校最近就家長應(yīng)該如何對待孩子的問題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下。請根據(jù)圖表1中提供的信息描述調(diào)查結(jié)果，并針對圖表2的其中一個數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫出你的看法。

注意：1．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出。

2．詞數(shù)不少于120左右。

生詞：圖表 chart

Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their

children.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.

According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. What’s more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.

As is shown in Chart 2,32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.

I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：假如你校最近就家長應(yīng)該如何對待孩子的問題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下。請根據(jù)圖表1中提供的信息描述調(diào)查結(jié)果，并針對圖表2的其中一個數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫出你的看法。表一，我最喜歡父母對帶我的3種行為：表揚(yáng)我22.75%；信任我33.5%；能和我平等交談31.7%。表二，我最不滿意父母對待我的3種行為：總訓(xùn)斥我23.4%；管得太多37.6%；期待太高32%。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫.要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。一定要寫出你自己的看法。注意：1．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出。2．詞數(shù)不少于120左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)和介詞的賓語從句完美結(jié)合；According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication.被動語態(tài)，賓語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語巧妙搭配；As is shown in Chart 2,32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. As引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.讓步狀語從句和條件狀語從句同時出現(xiàn)在一句中；I think parents should have practical expectations for their children.句中運(yùn)用了賓語從句表達(dá)了自己的看法。