Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是某外國語學(xué)校的學(xué)生會主席。最近，為了弘揚雷鋒精神，你校決定開展多項志愿服務(wù)活動。請用英語寫一篇倡議書，發(fā)表在校英語報上，號召同學(xué)們加入本校的志愿者俱樂部。內(nèi)容包括：

1.陳述當志愿者的好處；

2.向同學(xué)們發(fā)出幾點倡議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear fellow students,

Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. ____________________________

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Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students,

Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. It can benefit us in several ways. First of all, volunteering can help us learn more about society and gain valuable experience. Secondly, by volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we have learned to good use.

I hope more and more students will join the voluntary club of our school. Let’s express concern for the old and disabled people around us and offer a helping hand. Let’s clean the parks near our home. Let’s go to nursing homes to bring love to those in need.

Remember, we can make a difference to society if we are willing to lend a helping hand, so let’s take action.

Students’ Union

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為任務(wù)型作文，要求寫一篇倡議書。寫作要點要求明確，1.陳述當志愿者的好處；2.向同學(xué)們發(fā)出幾點倡議。故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求。

寫作亮點：本篇要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：賓語從句what we have learned和 more and more students will join the voluntary club of our school；排比句Let’s express concern；Let’s clean；和Let’s go。連接詞First of all, Secondly等。