Question

【題目】書面表達（滿分20分）

假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom來信詢問最近中國各地，尤其是北京，霧霾天氣嚴重的情況。請你給Tom寫封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 對霧霾天氣的情況描述

2. 霧霾對健康，生活及交通等的影響

3. 你的看法或建議

要求：100字左右（已給出部分不計入字數(shù)）

霧霾天氣: the hazy weather

Dear Tom,

I’ve received your letter and thanks for your concern. __________________

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Best wishes

Yours，

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’ve received your letter and thanks for your concern.

Recently the hazy weather has hit many places in China, causing quantities of serious problems. For a start, the hazy weather is harmful to people’s health and daily life. Many people find it difficult to breathe so they have to wear masks. What’s worse, more traffic jams have happened and quite a few flights have to be put off.

The hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors. The severely polluted environment contributes a lot to this nightmare.

In my opinion, we should call on people to use more public transport, thus reducing the number of cars in the streets. Besides, we have to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. Only if every single person makes contributions to protecting the environment, will we have a more cleaner and beautiful planet.

Best wishes

Yours，

LiHua

【解析】

具體到本次寫作，本文的話題是如何防范霧霾及保護環(huán)境，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，內(nèi)容有：1. 對霧霾天氣的情況描述；2. 霧霾對健康，生活及交通等的影響；3. 你的看法或建議�？忌�要按照要點適當增加細節(jié)，明確作文的基本內(nèi)容后，就是選用準確的詞匯和恰當?shù)木渥觼肀磉_。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，讓文章更有文采。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。

1. 最近霧霾天氣襲擊了中國很多地方，導致大量嚴重的問題。

①Recently the hazy weather has hit many places in China, causing quantities of serious problems.

.②Many places in China has been hit by the hazy weather recently, which led to quantities of serious problems.

2. 很多人發(fā)現(xiàn)很難呼吸以至于他們戴口罩。

①Many people find it difficult to breathe so they have to wear masks.

.②Many people have to wear masks because they find it difficult to breathe.