Question

【題目】假定你是李華，暑假期間去某個島上游玩，看見有很多可愛的動物。聽島上的一位老人說，現(xiàn)在動物的數(shù)量日漸減少，如果不采取措施，有些動物會有絕跡的危險�；貋砗竽憬o野生動物保護(hù)協(xié)會寫信，就保護(hù)動物提出以下建議：

1. 制定保護(hù)動物的法律

2. 建立動物保護(hù)區(qū)

3. 提高公眾保護(hù)動物的意識

提示：提高---意識：raise one’s awareness 保護(hù)區(qū)：set up natural reserve

日漸減少 decrease year by year 處于滅絕的危險be in danger of extinction

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 涵蓋所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my opinion on how to protect animals on the island I visited last weekend.

______ _ ________

______ _ ________

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Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to express my opinion on how to protect the monkeys on the island I visited last weekend. The animals there are lovely, but it’s said that the number of them is decreasing year by year. If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction.

As far as I’m concerned, laws concerning animal protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters. Besides, it is advisable to set up natural reserves or refuges. There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive and reproduce. What’s more, something should be done to raise people’s awareness of protecting animals.

To sum up, protecting animals is of great urgency and it is vital for us to take steps to protect them.

Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題：給動物保護(hù)協(xié)會寫信，提出一些保護(hù)動物的建議，并有部分的文字提示。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：in danger of ，extinction滅絕，concern，reproduce，raise people’s awareness of 提升人們的意識，is of great urgency十分緊急等，it is advisable to set up natural reserves or refuges.，it is vital for us to take steps to protect them是用了形式主語，There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments運用了There is no doubt that毫無疑問.....的句型。并且文章運用了As far as I’m concerned，Besides，What’s more，To sum up等過渡性短語來使得文章的條理更加清晰。