贊成 | 為同學們提供交際機會;利于增進同學之間的友誼;學習之余可以放松心情. |
反對 | 容易造成對時間和金錢的浪費;導致攀比;對青少年學習和成長造成不利影響. |
你的觀點 | … |
分析 本文是一個表格式的作文,根據(jù)表格提供的內(nèi)容文章可寫成三段式.第一段描述存在的現(xiàn)狀,第二段闡述贊成和反對的觀點,第三段闡明個人觀點..要把表格中的要點信心擴展成一個個完整的句子,然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求,把這些要點連句成文.
高分句型一:Sometimes,we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels,which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays.這是一個非限制性定語從句,which指代前邊整個句子的意思.
高分句型二:Some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship.本句中it是形式主語,真正的主語是動詞不定式to communicate with each other and develop our friendship.
解答 Dear Aeditor,
I'm a middle school student named Wang Ping.Recently,we often have to buy presents for our classmates'birthdays. Sometimes,we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels,which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays.(亮點句型一)【描述現(xiàn)象】
About this there are two different views.Some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship,(亮點句型二)and beides,we can relax after hard work at school.However,some other students think it's a waste of money and time and can lead us to getting into the bad habit of trying to keep up with the Joneses,which has a bad effect on our growth and studies.【贊成和反對】
As far as I'm concerned,it's not easy for our parents to make money and keep us at school for education.So there is no need for us to do like that.We must treasure our parents'labor and put our hearts into our studies.【個人觀點】
What do you think about it?I'm expecting your reply.
Yours,
Wang Ping
點評 該書面表達為圖表類,通常都有一定的數(shù)據(jù)或者表格內(nèi)容作為寫作參考和依據(jù).考生應(yīng)細致觀察圖表內(nèi)容,用準確的、簡單明了的語言將圖表內(nèi)容表達清楚.另外,平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)短語和詞匯,以使得行文有更多的亮點.
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