Question

以A Ten-Minute Break 為題，寫一篇詞數(shù)為100左右的短文。短文的內(nèi)容必須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：
1、課間十分鐘的休息是必要的；2、要注意休息的方式，別讓自己過于興奮；
3、自己通常是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。

Answer 1

One possible version:
A Ten-Minute Break 
As students, we have classes from early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.
During the ten-minute break we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.  
My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercise. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.

試題分析：本文是篇簡短的論說文，內(nèi)容提示較詳細(xì)，學(xué)生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示寫作分為三部分內(nèi)容，尤其要具體寫出自己的課間十分鐘是怎么度過的。另外，要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。用第一人稱有單數(shù)也要用復(fù)數(shù)。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿唬�文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如definitely important ，feel both physically and mentally tired ，get rid of，instead of等， 還運(yùn)用了名詞性從句What we need is to have a real rest，定語從句So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.及狀語從句When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：therefore，otherwise等。