Question

6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
It was 7：15 in the morning of February 8，2017． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the   street． Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road． The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road． He fell with a cry． The car didn't stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864． Two minutes late，I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了一次交通事故．
2007年2月8日，我正沿著公園路向東走，一個(gè)老人從對(duì)面的公園出來(lái)．一輛黃色汽車(chē)從第三街道轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)來(lái)，撞倒了老人，司機(jī)沒(méi)有停車(chē)，全速向西逃走．我注意到司機(jī)是一個(gè)帶眼睛的年輕人，車(chē)牌號(hào)是AC864．我攔住一輛過(guò)路車(chē)把老人送到醫(yī)院．

解答 It was 7：15 in the morning of February 8，2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the   street． Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road． The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road． He fell with a cry． The car didn't stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was∧young womanwore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864． Two minuteslate，I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．
試題分析：
1：in改為on．考查介詞．  具體到某一天的早晨使用on．
2：while改為when．考查狀語(yǔ)從句的引導(dǎo)詞．  when后面的從句中可以使用延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞也可以使用短暫性動(dòng)詞．While后面的從句只能使用延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞．這里的come out of…是一個(gè)短暫性動(dòng)詞．故使用when．
3：sides改為side．考查名詞． 路的另外一邊是單數(shù)形式side．
4：made改為make．考查并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．   這里的make a right turn與前面的drive up是并列關(guān)系．
5：she改為he．考查代詞．  這里的he就是指前面的the man．
6：drive改為drove．考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．  這里的drove與前面的didn't是一致的，都使用一般過(guò)去式．
7：was后面接a．考查冠詞．  后面的名詞woman是可數(shù)名詞，故使用a來(lái)修飾．
8：wore前面加who；或者把wore改為wearing．考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)．  本句中wore前面加who是使用定語(yǔ)從句，who代指先行詞young woman；或者用現(xiàn)在分詞wearing做定語(yǔ)來(lái)修飾young woman．
9：late改為later．考查單詞辨析． 表示"兩分鐘以后"用 after two minutes或two minutes later．
10：passed改為passing．考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．修飾名詞car應(yīng)該使用現(xiàn)在分詞doing轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞作定語(yǔ)，passing表示"正在經(jīng)過(guò)的"．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
本題考查較為細(xì)致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱(chēng)和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致．各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用．一般的這類(lèi)題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類(lèi)題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)較多．平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)．修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過(guò)后的短文是否語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯．