Question

15．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)120．
Global Shortage of Fresh Water
1．人們認(rèn)為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水，河水，井水）
2．實(shí)際上淡水是短缺的（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染嚴(yán)重）
3．我們應(yīng)當(dāng)怎么辦（提示：節(jié)約用水，開發(fā)新水源）

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息，用英語寫一篇短文，對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力．首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見的短語used up用光；plenty of許多；In fact事實(shí)上；At the same time與此同時(shí)；In this way用這種方式；It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用 it seem as if 好象 這個(gè)固定句型結(jié)構(gòu)；At the same time，a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day．這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)．We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones在這個(gè)句子中protect 與develop是并列的，所以形式保持一致；
It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．（高分句型一）
With the rapid increase of population and fast development of industries，water is more needed than before．（高分句型二）
Everyone should consciously save on water and certain law should be made that no water will be polluted．（高分句型三）

解答 Global Shortage of Fresh Water
       People often think that water will never be used up．There is plenty of water，such as rain，water from the rivers and wells．It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．（高分句型一）
       In fact water is rather limited on the earth．With the rapid increase of population and fast development of industries，water is more needed than before．（高分句型二）At the same time，a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day．Some big cities in China are facing the problem of water shortage already．There，water supply is controlled and industry has been restrained．
       What should we do about the water shortage？I think，first，the people should be made aware of the real situation about the water．Everyone should consciously save on water and certain law should be made that no water will be polluted．（高分句型三）We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones．In this way I believe that our cities will not be thirsty for water in the future．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．