Question

【題目】假如你是李明，你的外教老師Tom來信詢問你校和諧校園的創(chuàng)建情況。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，簡要回復(fù)此次活動(dòng)給你校帶來的主要變化：

①校園環(huán)境的變化；

②同學(xué)、師生關(guān)系的變化;

③學(xué)習(xí)氛圍的變化；

④自己的感受；

參考詞匯：harmonious 和諧的 environment 環(huán)境 attractive 吸引人的；迷人的。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式和開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to tell you something about the harmonious school activity, which makes many changes on our campus.

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Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m writing to tell you something about the harmonious school activity, which makes many changes on our campus.

As is known to all, a harmonious school life is important to high school students. Firstly, the environment in our school gets better and better. With more and more trees and flowers planted, our school looks more beautiful. We can have a good rest and put our heart into study. What’s more, the atmosphere among people is very harmonious. Students get along well with each other. We do respect our teacher and they also do love us.Our school is just like a big family. We will have a good mood and enjoy being together.

In my opinion, I think we should try our best to build a harmonious school life. I like studying in such a beautiful school. Let’s do what we can from now on to make our school more and more attractive.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】試題分析：

本文是給外教老師Tom回信，向他介紹和諧校園的創(chuàng)建情況以及此次活動(dòng)給你校帶來的主要變化。文章給出了提綱，成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。完整陳述提綱中的四個(gè)方面內(nèi)容。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

1.使用高級句型：as放句首引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句As is known to all, a harmonious school life is important to high school students.；with的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)With more and more trees and flowers planted, our school looks more beautiful.；助動(dòng)詞do表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的用法We do respect our teacher and they also do love us.；使用賓語從句Let’s do what we can from now on to make our school more and more attractive.。2.使用了過渡詞語：Firstly，What’s more 等。3.使用了重要短語：put … into把…投入到；get along well with與…相處融洽；In my opinion在我看來。