Question

8．假設你是李華，你的英國朋友杰克寫信詢問你上周參加英語演講比賽的情況，請根據以下提示，給他回一封信．內容包括：
1．賽前準備；
2．比賽結果．
注意：1．詞數100左右（開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數）；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack，
I'd like to share my experience of joining in the English speech contest last week with you． 
                                     
                                         Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料信息，用英語寫一封信．內容包括：1．賽前準備；2．比賽結果．3．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現在時為主．
重點詞匯：share with sb（與某人分享）；spoken English（英語口語）； take part in （參加）；refer to （查閱）； relate to （與…相關）；turne to sb（向某人求助）；insiste on （堅持）； looking forward to （盼望，期待）
高分句型：1．Therefore，the moment I heard our school would hold an English speech contest，I decided to take part in it．
                  the moment用作連詞，譯為"一…就"，本句意為"因此，一聽到學校要舉行英語演講比賽我就決定參加"．
          2．Then，I turned to my teacher，①who②gave me some advice on how to give a good speech．
                             ①who引導定語從句，關系代詞who指代先行詞my teacher；②give sb advide on sth 給某人一些關于某事的建議．

解答 Dear Jack，
     I'd like to share my experience of joining in the English speech contest last week with you．
     I have always hoped to improve my ability in giving public speeches and my spoken English．Therefore，the moment I heard our school would hold an English speech contest，I decided to take part in it（高分句型一）．
      To prepare myself well for the speech，I did lots of work．First of all，I referred to many books to get information related to my topic．Then，I turned to my teacher，who gave me some advice on how to give a good speech．（高分句型二）Besides，I insisted on practicing it before the contest．Finally my hard work paid off．I came first in the contest．
    Looking forward to your latest news．
                                              Yours，
                                             Li Hua

點評 本題為提綱類寫作，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應的寫作要點．考生在平時應注意積累相應的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．