Question

11．假設(shè)你是高二（1）班的學(xué)生李華．最近，你在本班同學(xué)中做了一個(gè)調(diào)查，了解同學(xué)們過(guò)馬路時(shí)是否有闖紅燈的行為及其原因．請(qǐng)你給校報(bào)寫一封信，報(bào)告調(diào)查結(jié)果，并就如何解決這一問題談?wù)勛约旱慕ㄗh．
Survey Results

Question	Answers	Percentage
Have you ever jaywalked across a street at a red traffic light？	Yes	71%
	No	29%

Reasons for jaywalking	Percentage
1．Following others	24%
2．Saving time	48%
3．Seeing empty streets	28%

提示詞：jaywalk亂穿馬路
注意：1．開頭已為你寫好．  2．詞數(shù)不少于60．
Dear Editor，
    I'm Li Hua，from Class 1，Senior 2．I did a survey among my classmates about jaywalking recently．_______________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表類作文，題目中給出的材料為帶有數(shù)據(jù)的圖表，故動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真觀察圖表數(shù)據(jù)，了解其所蘊(yùn)含的信息．寫作中應(yīng)先簡(jiǎn)單描述一下圖表內(nèi)容，及中國(guó)式過(guò)馬路的特點(diǎn)，并分析原因，提出自己的建議．然后列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，注意從句的應(yīng)用，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系
亮點(diǎn)部分  
According to the result，we find that about  71% students have you ever jaywalked across a street at a red traffic light while about 29% students have never done so．（高分句型）
Others lack safety awareness，thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together．（高分句型）What's more，some people will go across the street when seeing empty streets，which is also dangerous sometimes．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Editor，
    I'm Li Hua，from Class 1，Senior 2．I did a survey among my classmates about jaywalking recently．According to the result，we find that about  71% students have you ever jaywalked across a street at a red traffic light while about 29% students have never done so．（高分句型）The following are the reasons．
   There are there main reasons behind this phenomenon．Some people are always in a hurry，so they ignore the traffic signal to save time．Others lack safety awareness，thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together．（高分句型）What's more，some people will go across the street when seeing empty streets，which is also dangerous sometimes．（高分句型）
    Actually  jaywalking is very dangerous because it may lead to more traffic jams and accidents．I hope immediate measures should be taken to prevent this bad behavior．（高分句型）First，the public should beeducated to follow the traffic rules．Second，more overpasses should be builtto make it easy to cross the street．Besides，whoever breaks the traffic rules shouldbe severely punished．By doing so，we will be able to get around safely．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．