Question

【題目】假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三1班的李華。請(qǐng)按以下四幅圖的順序，給你校“英語(yǔ)園地”投稿，介紹上個(gè)月你們班參加學(xué)校組織的“原創(chuàng)詩(shī)詞大賽”的比賽過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

Last month, our class took part in the Campus Poetry Contest held in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Last month, our class took part in the Campus Poetry Contest held in our school.

Our headmaster announced the start of the contest and the topic–Our Colorful School Life. He also required that every class should create one poem of any length and any type and thenpresent it in front of the whole school. We listened attentively, showing great interest.

When we were back to our classroom, we discussedwhat to write about our poem. Some of my classmates contributed brilliant ideas, others set about writing. Right after our poem was completed,we started to practice for the coming show. Everybody worked hard and did our bit. Our teacher also offered us help.

Finally the big day came. The hall was full of excitement. When it was our turn, I, standing on the stage with my classmates, led the reading of our poem.

In the end, when our headmaster announced the winners, the whole place burst out with clapping and cheering.

It was really fun!

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇記敘文；假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三1班的李華。請(qǐng)按以下四幅圖的順序，給你校“英語(yǔ)園地”投稿，介紹上個(gè)月你們班參加學(xué)校組織的“原創(chuàng)詩(shī)詞大賽”的比賽過(guò)程。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：take part in（參加），the Campus Poetry Contest（校園詩(shī)歌大賽），in front of（在……前面），attentively（專注地）；contribute（想出；貢獻(xiàn)）；be full of（充滿）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。