【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)() 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sir,

I'm writing to you for the mobile phone which I buy on 20th August 2016 at Attracting Shopping. Ten days after that, it didn't ring or could it send short messages. Then I reported it to the seller, but was told that the model had been selling out and I had to wait at least three month for a new one. Then I wanted it to repaired, but he said since it was a new model, it was impossible to fixing it without the right spare parts. How disappointing I was by hearing that! How can I wait that long? However, I have to write to you and ask you to have the phone replaced within a week or return me back the money.

I'm looking forward to your early reply!

Sincerely yours

Li Hua

【答案】

【1】buy→bought

【2】or→nor

【3】selling→sold

【4】month→months

【5】to后加be

【6】fixing→fix

【7】disappointing→disappointed

【8】by→on

【9】However→Therefore

【10】去掉back

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封信，講述了作者新買的手機(jī)壞了，寫信要求退換。

【1】buy→bought 根據(jù)后面的時(shí)間8月20日，故要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把buy改為bought。

【2】or→nor 句意：它不能打電話，也不能發(fā)短信息。nor用以強(qiáng)調(diào)前面的否定或繼續(xù)否定，意為“也不”。故把or改為nor。

【3】selling→sold 句意：手機(jī)已經(jīng)被售完。根據(jù)句意可知，用過去完成時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，故把selling改為sold。

【4】month→months 前面有three修飾，故month要用復(fù)數(shù)，故把month改為months。

【5】to后加be 此處是動(dòng)詞不定式一般式的被動(dòng)形式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，表示“被修理”，故在to后加be。

【6】fixing→fix 句意：修理它是不可能的。動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語(yǔ)，故把fixing改為fix。

【7】disappointing→disappointed 句意：我一聽到那是多么失望��！形容人感到“失望的”要用-ed形式的形容詞，故把disappointing改為disappointed。

【8】by→on 固定形式：on doing sth一……就，句意：我一聽到那是多么失望��！by意為“通過”，與語(yǔ)境不符，故把by改為on。

【9】However→Therefore 句意：因此，我不得不給你寫信。此處是因果關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把However改為Therefore。

【10】去掉back return意為“歸還，返回”。本身含有back的意思，故去掉back。

【知識(shí)拓展】

1.though/altjough/while/in spite of/despite(盡管)不能和but在同一句中出現(xiàn)；because/as/since/because of不能和so在同一句中出現(xiàn)；return不能和back在同一句中出現(xiàn)；repeat不能和again在同一句中出現(xiàn)；enter不能和in/into在同一句中出現(xiàn)。

2. 表示情感的現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞

surprising令人驚訝的，surprised感到驚訝；frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕； moving令人感動(dòng)的， moved 感動(dòng)；exciting 令人興奮的，excited 感到興奮；boring令人厭煩的， bored感到厭煩；disappointing令人失望的；disappointed感到失望的；annoying令人煩惱的；annoyed感到煩惱的�，F(xiàn)在分詞的主語(yǔ)通常指事物；過去分詞的主語(yǔ)通常指人。

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