Question

19．下面是中學生對志愿者工作的看法的調查表，請根據下面所給的信息寫一篇英語短文討論中學生是否應該參加志愿者活動（voluntary work）并闡明你的觀點．字數120左右．

70%的學生贊成參加志愿者活動	為社會作貢獻，幫助別人是一件很有意義的工作，帶來很多個人利益，為日后的工作獲得寶貴的技能和經驗，為自己創(chuàng)造機遇，增強信心、自覺意識、良好的交際能力和領導才能
25%的學生不愿意從事志愿者活動	無報酬，浪費時間，耽誤學習
5%的學生無明確態(tài)度	漠不關心

Different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work．                                                                                    

Answer 1

分析 拿到作文題目，首先要認真審題，這是一篇提綱作文，下面是對中學生對志愿者工作的看法的調查表，請根據下面所給的信息寫一篇英語小短文討論中學生是否應該參加志愿者活動（voluntary work）．所以要用一般現在時來寫．需要寫的內容已經以表格形式給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式．
亮點句型一：They consider that it can make a contribution to society and that it is a worthwhile job to help others．他們認為它可以為社會做出貢獻，幫助別人是一件值得做的事． 句中that it can make a contribution to society and that it is a worthwhile job to help others是一個賓語從句，賓語從句中
"it can make a contribution to society""that it is a worthwhile job to help others"是由and連接的并列句．
亮點句型二：No matter how small it is，it will help make a difference．不管它有多小，都會有幫助．No matter how 引導的是讓步狀語從句"不管它多么小"．

解答 Different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work．They consider that it can make a contribution to society and that it is a worthwhile job to help others．（亮點句型一）It can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career．Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them，build up confidence，self-awareness，good communication skills and leadership ability．【70%學生觀點】
    25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work．They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time．The rest of the students don't have clear attitudes towards it，nor do they care about it．【25%學生觀點】
     I think each of us should make a contribution to society．No matter how small it is，it will help make a difference．（亮點句型二）【個人觀點】

點評 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．