Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國朋友Mike來信告訴你下個(gè)月他要來海南旅游,對于他的到來你很開心,并做了一些安排,請給他回信告知你的安排。信的內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)歡迎之情。

2.介紹海南的特色 。

3.說明你的安排。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike.

I' m more than excited to know that you' ll come to Hainan for a visit next month.You ' re warmly welcome! To make your travel here more smooth, let me tell you my arrangements for you. First of all, since you' ve never been to Hainan before,I will go and pick you up at the airport. Secondly, if you like, I' d like to invite you to live and dine in my home during your stay in Hainan. I' ll surely make you feel at home. Thirdly, I can accompany you during your whole trip here if you wish.

What do yon think of my arrangement? looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。你的英國朋友要來海南旅游，對于他的到來你很開心,并做了一些安排,請給他回信告知你的安排。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

要求：1.對對方的到來表示歡迎

2.介紹海南特色

3.旅游安排

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

more than; warmly welcome; arrangements; first of all; pick sb up; make sb feel at home; invite sb to do sth; accompany; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I' m more than excited to know that you' ll come to Hainan for a visit next month.

2. You ' re warmly welcome!

3. To make your travel here more smooth, let me tell you my arrangements for you.

4. First of all, since you' ve never been to Hainan before,I will go and pick you up at the airport.

5. Secondly, if you like, I' d like to invite you to live and dine in my home during your stay in Hainan.

6. I' ll surely make you feel at home.

7. Looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand…，Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…。

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改