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5．現(xiàn)在我們國家越來越重視體育，尤其中小學(xué)學(xué)校，加強(qiáng)了對體育課要求．請就這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇關(guān)于在中小學(xué)生中開展體育課的重要性．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．說明健康的重要性．
2．用個人經(jīng)歷說明運(yùn)動的好處．
3．號召中小學(xué)生積極加入到體育鍛煉中來．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
As the proverb goes，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"From this，we know that health is very important to everybody，especially to teenagers．But how to keep fit？As far as I'm concerned，I think doing physical exercises has lots of advantages．（高分句型一）
First of all，doing exercises in the morning will build up my body as well as gives me a good appetite to eat my breakfast．（高分句型二）What's more，the air in the morning is really fresh and clean，so I can keep my mind active in class．By doing physical exercises every day I can keep my mind clear that I can finish my homework in time．（高分句型三）If I do not do any physical exercise，I will feel tired．During the night，I may find it harder to fall asleep．Second，doing exercises every day will help me to develop a better personality．It takes time and patience to do exercises．Doing physical exercises makes me stronger and healthier．That's my personal experience．
As a student，sports are important．You can pick up your favorite sport and do it every day．Only in this way can you have both pleasure and a healthy body．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息現(xiàn)在我們國家越來越重視體育，尤其中小學(xué)學(xué)校，加強(qiáng)了對體育課要求．請就這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇關(guān)于在中小學(xué)生中開展體育課的重要性，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：說明健康的重要性．用個人經(jīng)歷說明運(yùn)動的好處．號召中小學(xué)生積極加入到體育鍛煉中來．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As the proverb goes正如諺語所說；As far as I'm concerned以我的觀點(diǎn)來看； First of all首先；build up my body強(qiáng)身健體；What's more而且；Second其次；in this way以這種方式；do exercises做運(yùn)動；
As far as I'm concerned，I think doing physical exercises has lots of advantages．（高分句型一）
First of all，doing exercises in the morning will build up my body as well as gives me a good appetite to eat my breakfast．（高分句型二）
By doing physical exercises every day I can keep my mind clear that I can finish my homework in time．（高分句型三）

解答 As the proverb goes，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"From this，we know that health is very important to everybody，especially to teenagers．But how to keep fit？As far as I'm concerned，I think doing physical exercises has lots of advantages．（高分句型一）
        First of all，doing exercises in the morning will build up my body as well as gives me a good appetite to eat my breakfast．（高分句型二）What's more，the air in the morning is really fresh and clean，so I can keep my mind active in class．By doing physical exercises every day I can keep my mind clear that I can finish my homework in time．（高分句型三）If I do not do any physical exercise，I will feel tired．During the night，I may find it harder to fall asleep．Second，doing exercises every day will help me to develop a better personality．It takes time and patience to do exercises．Doing physical exercises makes me stronger and healthier．That's my personal experience．
       As a student，sports are important．You can pick up your favorite sport and do it every day．Only in this way can you have both pleasure and a healthy body．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．