Question

快餐在中國非常流行,尤其受到青少年的青睞.某英文報(bào)委托你寫一篇有關(guān)快餐食品的英語短文,并包括如下要點(diǎn):
1. 快餐受歡迎的原因:
1)方便,省時(shí);  2)價(jià)格合理,服務(wù)好.
2. 快餐食品的不足:營養(yǎng)不均衡.
3. 你對快餐的態(tài)度和觀點(diǎn).
注意: 1. 詞數(shù): 100—120
2.從營養(yǎng)角度來講: in terms of nutrition
3.快餐:fast food
4.方便的. Convenient
5.均衡的:balanced
Fast food is very popular with people in China, especially the young. The reasons for its popularity are as follows.
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Answer 1

不唯一
Fast food is very popular with people in China, especially the young. The reasons for its popularity are as follows.
Firstly, with the quick pace of life, fast food is really convenient and time-saving. People can save a lot of time and trouble with food ready made so that they can devote themselves to taking part in other activities. Secondly. The prices for fast food are reasonable and the service is excellent. However, it is not a good food in terms of nutrition, because the nutrition in it is not well balanced.
In my opinion, people can have fast food when they are really in a hurry. If not, they had better have the traditional food.

試題分析：
這篇短文是有關(guān)快餐的。文章脈絡(luò)已經(jīng)清楚，要點(diǎn)也有了。進(jìn)行寫作時(shí)，可將要點(diǎn)以單詞或短語形式列出來，然后擴(kuò)成句子。這樣做要點(diǎn)不會缺少。然后利用已經(jīng)學(xué)的知識如從句、高級詞匯對這些句子進(jìn)行重組，在句子中加連詞。如文章中我們用的firstly,secondly,however,in my opinion等等就比較好。
點(diǎn)評：此類寫作相比較簡單，列出要點(diǎn)后，如何進(jìn)行合理的拓展，這是一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。更難的是：如何更好地利用已經(jīng)學(xué)的知識如從句、高級詞匯對這些句子進(jìn)行重組，如何在句子中加連詞等，這些都是難點(diǎn)。這就要求學(xué)生平時(shí)在多多閱讀此類文章，從中汲取有益之處，另外平時(shí)要多進(jìn)行這方面的訓(xùn)練。問及本人的對此事的觀點(diǎn)一般我們只寫一條，有時(shí)也可寫兩條。另外注意：給出的參考詞匯一定要用在文章中去。