Question

目前許多學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生采取封閉式管理，學(xué)生對(duì)此看法不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />

有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為
學(xué)校限制學(xué)生的自由 學(xué)生和社會(huì)接觸少 學(xué)生的興趣和愛(ài)好不能得到充分的發(fā)展，因此……	學(xué)校是學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)的地方 學(xué)生應(yīng)該安心在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí) 學(xué)生缺乏自覺(jué)性，離開了老師，可能會(huì)……
你的看法……

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2.短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.                              
                                                                               
                                                                        

Answer 1

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have diffenent opinions about it.
Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have less interest in their studies.
Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence their studies.
Personally, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是對(duì)學(xué)校對(duì)采取封閉式管理學(xué)生的不同觀點(diǎn)，題目給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，也要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，然后贊同的觀點(diǎn)，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于正反方觀點(diǎn)作文，但是要點(diǎn)給出的比較全，只需要考生表達(dá)清楚，還有自己的觀點(diǎn)。在寫作的時(shí)候要適合合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。