Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假設(shè)你是社區(qū)“老年之家”志愿者協(xié)會的負責人李明，近期準備組織老人們到公園踏春賞花。請就此活動寫一份申請報告給社區(qū)相關(guān)負責人(申請報告中請不要出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名)。你的申請報告需包括:

1. 此次活動的主旨和安排；

2. 需要社區(qū)提供的支持(如人員、經(jīng)費等)。

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Answer 1

【答案】 In order to promote the traditional virtue of "respecting the old and loving the young" of the Chinese nation and enrich the life of the elderly, our volunteer association of "home for the elderly" are going to take the elderly to enjoy the spring flowers this weekend. After the discussion, we choose Nanhu Park as our destination, which has a picturesque scenery and attracts a large number of tourists every day. What's more, it is close to our community and it is convenient for us to for us to get there.

As there are some elderly people in our community who are too old to walk far, we decide to rent several wheelchairs and push them there to enjoy the flowers, but we are short of money, so we hope that our community can provide some financial support to pay for the cost of renting wheelchairs. I would appreciate it if we can get your approval.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是提綱類作文，要求寫一封申請報告。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封申請報告：假設(shè)你是社區(qū)“老年之家”志愿者協(xié)會的負責人李明，近期準備組織老人們到公園踏春賞花。請就此活動寫一份申請報告給社區(qū)相關(guān)負責人(申請報告中請不要出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名)。你的申請報告需包括:1. 此次活動的主旨和安排；2. 需要社區(qū)提供的支持(如人員、經(jīng)費等)。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：traditional virtue（傳統(tǒng)美德），volunteer association（志愿者協(xié)會），picturesque（風(fēng)景如畫的），scenery（景色），attract（吸引），enrich（使豐富），rent（租用），wheelchair（輪椅），financial support（資金支持）及convenient（方便的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。