分析 這是一封道歉信.根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱,用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)簡(jiǎn)述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò),一般將來(lái)時(shí)提出補(bǔ)救措施.內(nèi)容包括:一表明書(shū)信目的;二簡(jiǎn)述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)并且提出補(bǔ)救措施;三再次表達(dá)歉意并提出希望.
高分句型:
1.I'm writing this letter to tell you what has happened to the bag I borrowed from you yesterday.句子里what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句 has happened to the bag I borrowed from you yesterday; I borrowed from you yesterday是定語(yǔ)從句,修飾先行詞the bag.
我寫信來(lái)告訴你,昨天我從你那里借來(lái)的包發(fā)生了一些事.
2.Unfortunately,when I wanted to put something into it,I found my father's pet dog had torn it into several pieces句子里.Unfortunately表示"不幸的是",修飾整個(gè)句子;賓語(yǔ)從句my father's pet dog had torn it into several pieces發(fā)生在I found 之前,所以用的是過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài).
不幸的是,當(dāng)我想要往里面放東西的時(shí)候,發(fā)現(xiàn)我爸爸的寵物狗把包撕碎了.
解答 One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm writing this letter to tell you what has happened to the bag I borrowed from you yesterday.【高分句型一】(表明書(shū)信目的)
When I got home after school,I put the bag on the sofa and began to do my homework.Unfortunately,when I wanted to put something into it,I found my father's pet dog had torn it into several pieces.【高分句型二】I'm so sorry for this.When my father knew it,we went to the store and bought a new one for you.I will take the new bag to school tomorrow.I hope you won't be angry and can accept it.I also hope I can still borrow some things from you when I need them.(簡(jiǎn)述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)并且提出補(bǔ)救措施)
Apologize to you again for this and hope we can be friends forever.(再次表達(dá)歉意并提出希望)
Yours,
Li Hua
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寫作步驟:
第一步:審題,確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá).
第二步:擬定提綱,創(chuàng)造良好的開(kāi)端;敘述得體,布局謀篇;巧妙過(guò)渡,完美結(jié)尾.
第三步:遣詞造句,套用句型,上下銜接,地道表達(dá),行文成篇(注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用).
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