Question

【題目】

英語話劇比賽

主題:人與自然

時間:7 月 15 日下午 2:00-5:00

地點:101 教室

參賽選手:10 名學生

聯(lián)系人:Li H ua (電話 88507033)

假設你是江西師范大學附屬中學學生會主席李華。你們學校將舉辦一次英語話劇比賽(drama competition)，希望你能夠邀請附近某大學的外教 Ms. Smith 來作評委(judge)。請參照以下比賽通知給她發(fā)一份郵件。

注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 詞左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)使行文連貫。

Dear Ms. Smith,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

With best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Union of the Middle School Attached / Affiliated to Jiangxi Normal University, located just near the university where you are teaching. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition.

You see, to promote students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th, lasting three hours. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom101, and all the students of our school will be attending it.

We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions. You can reach me through my phone number 88507033 at your convenience. I’m looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，邀請附近某大學的外教 Ms. Smith 來作話劇比賽評委。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

要求：

1．介紹自己

2．告知比賽時間、地點、主題、人數(shù)

3．邀請他擔任評委，告知聯(lián)系電話

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

Have the honor to do sth; judge; promote; interest; plan to do sth; hold; theme; last; compete with; attend; feel honored; join us; instructions; reach me; at your convenience; looking forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition.

2. You see, to promote students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature.

3. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th, lasting three hours.

4. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom101, and all the students of our school will be attending it.

5. We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions.

6. You can reach me through my phone number 88507033 at your convenience.

7. I’m looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not only…but (also)…, Including

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…,As for, So…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改