【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。 增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。 2、只允許修改10處,多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become hikers, that are called Donkey Friends (驢友) in Chinese. A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacation can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities

【答案】

【1】that 改為who.

【2】has held 間加been

【3】to feel 改為feel

【4】deep 改為deeply

【5】relaxing 改為 relaxed

【6】have been happened 中的been 去掉

【7】because 后加of

【8】life 改為lives

【9】so 改為 such

【10】which 改為 that。

【解析】

試題分析：徒步旅行已成為在中國(guó)流行，近年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的人成為遠(yuǎn)足者，稱為驢友。本文是一篇關(guān)于徒步旅行的討論。

【1】that 改為who.考查關(guān)系詞。此處是由who引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句。

【2】has held 間加been考查動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)。討論是被舉行的，所以用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。關(guān)于遠(yuǎn)足的討論在我們班舉行了。故has held 間加been

【3】to feel 改為feel，考查動(dòng)詞。make 后加動(dòng)詞原形不加動(dòng)詞不定式，讓某人做某事。徒步旅行可以讓人感覺(jué)更健康。

【4】deep 改為deeply考查副詞。這里修飾動(dòng)詞find用副詞，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被大自然的美麗所吸引。故deep 改為deeply

【5】relaxing 改為 relaxed考查動(dòng)詞。relaxed放松的，主語(yǔ)一般是人，relaxing令人放松的，主語(yǔ)一般是物，故用relaxed。他們也可以在深山散步放松。

【6】have been happened 中的been 去掉，考查動(dòng)詞。事故有時(shí)會(huì)發(fā)生后因?yàn)榈巧街R(shí)貧乏。

【7】because 后加of 考查連詞。poor knowledge of hiking是一個(gè)詞組，不是一個(gè)完整的句子。所以because 后加of。事故有時(shí)會(huì)發(fā)生后因?yàn)榈巧街R(shí)貧乏。

【8】life 改為lives考查名詞。一些人甚至失去了他們的生命。這里表一些人，用復(fù)數(shù)，故life 改為lives。

【9】so 改為 such�？疾樾稳菰~。such 是形容詞，修飾名詞或名詞詞組，so是副詞，只能修飾形容詞或副詞。故so 改為 such。

【10】which 改為 that�？疾殛P(guān)系詞。that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。他們建議，法律應(yīng)通過(guò)和徒步旅行者在參加活動(dòng)之前應(yīng)該參加培訓(xùn)。

【學(xué)法指導(dǎo)】

在短文改錯(cuò)中常出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤主要有以下幾類：

1. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)用錯(cuò)，可數(shù)與不可數(shù)名詞的混用。比如倒數(shù)第3句Some hikers even lost their life. life是可數(shù)名詞，一些人甚至失去了他們的生命。這里表一些人，用復(fù)數(shù)，故life 改為lives。

2. 動(dòng)詞：時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，常出現(xiàn)在總體時(shí)態(tài)為過(guò)去或現(xiàn)在時(shí)，中間雜有不適的另一時(shí)態(tài)的現(xiàn)象；或是及物動(dòng)詞后無(wú)賓語(yǔ)，或是不及物動(dòng)詞后加了賓語(yǔ)；需要接ing形式的接了to，或相反等。比如第二句A discussion about hiking has held in our class. 考查動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)。討論是被舉行的，所以用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。關(guān)于遠(yuǎn)足的討論在我們班舉行了。故has held 間加been

比如第5句，They can also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. 考查動(dòng)詞。relaxed放松的，主語(yǔ)一般是人，relaxing令人放松的，主語(yǔ)一般是物，故用relaxed。他們也可以在深山散步放松。

3. 形容詞副詞：常出現(xiàn)需形容詞的地方用了副詞或相反；關(guān)系副詞where， when， why等的缺失或錯(cuò)用。比如第4句They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. 考查副詞。這里修飾動(dòng)詞find用副詞，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被大自然的美麗所吸引。故deep 改為deeply

4. 介詞：主要是介詞的多余或缺失，錯(cuò)用。

5. 主謂一致性：第三人稱單數(shù)漏掉s，或主語(yǔ)為復(fù)數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用了單數(shù)；再就是就近原則對(duì)主語(yǔ)的影響。

6. 冠詞：定冠詞the的多余或缺失，如季節(jié)，月份，星期，球類及三餐活動(dòng)，稱呼頭銜前等不能加the的地方加了the。

7. 數(shù)詞：主要是序數(shù)詞與基數(shù)詞的混用和錯(cuò)用。

8. 連詞：不合句中的邏輯關(guān)系。如需轉(zhuǎn)折連詞（如but）的時(shí)候用了承接連詞（so），或相反等等。比如第6句accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. 考查連詞。poor knowledge of hiking是一個(gè)詞組，不是一個(gè)完整的句子。所以because 后加of。事故有時(shí)會(huì)發(fā)生后因?yàn)榈巧街R(shí)貧乏。

9. 代詞：主要是代詞的格與數(shù)的錯(cuò)用。如男性用了女性代詞，單數(shù)用了復(fù)數(shù)代詞或相反；應(yīng)當(dāng)用形容詞性的物主代詞用了賓格，主格或相反，關(guān)系代詞的錯(cuò)用或缺失。

10. 常用固定短語(yǔ)或固定用法及句型用錯(cuò)。

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