假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；不按要求方式改的不給分！

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Walter’s goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school first, so he put his heart into his study —in particular, biology, chemistry, and maths. Because he worked hard at these subjects, Walter became good at it. However, Walter forgot that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result, Walter fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate like planned. Walter learned a good lesson.

1.was后加to

2.successfully-successful

3.study-studies

4.it-them

5.beside-besides

6.去掉been

7.fails-failed

8.in-at

9.But-So

10.like-as

【解析】

1.小題1】“目標(biāo)是”解釋內(nèi)容，be動詞后用to do結(jié)構(gòu)，因此was后加to。

2.小題2】形容詞修飾名詞，因此successfully-successful。

3.小題3】各科學(xué)業(yè)，應(yīng)該用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式study-studies。

4.小題4】代詞是指代復(fù)數(shù)名詞“科目”。因此it-them。

5.小題5】besides“另外；除此之外”，beside“旁邊”，根據(jù)句意因此beside-besides。

6.小題6】他已經(jīng)選擇的，是主動關(guān)系，去掉been。

7.小題7】通篇是一般過去時(shí)，因此現(xiàn)在時(shí)fails-failed 。

8.小題8】at the end of，“在….之末” 介詞in-at。

9.小題9】因此他不得不重新學(xué)習(xí)，前后是因果關(guān)系。But-So。

10.小題10】按照計(jì)劃，like是介詞“像”。因此like-as。

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