【題目】根據(jù)以下所給的信息,介紹蘋果公司的最新產(chǎn)品蘋果智能手表。

產(chǎn)品名稱:蘋果牌智能手表

外形特點:它被視為戴在手腕上的小型計算機, 采用了藍寶石屏幕與Force Touch觸摸技術(shù),有銀色、金色、紅色和白色等多種顏色供選擇。

功能:可以發(fā)郵件、短信、支付網(wǎng)購產(chǎn)品和導航;智能手表還可以監(jiān)控佩戴者的健康狀況和強壯程度。如果想使用智能手表的大部分功能,最好與iPhone同時使用。

價格:$349~$10,000

購買信息:4月10號接受預定,4月24號在美國及其他8個國家出售。

參考詞匯:藍寶石屏幕 Sapphire screen 預定 pre-order 導航navigation services

【寫作要求】

只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。

【評分標準】

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章連貫。

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【答案】

Apple Watch, a newly launched product by the Apple Company, is a wrist-top micro-computer with a Sapphire display integrating Force Touch technology, and a range of colours from silver, golden, red to white for customers to choose from. At the touch of the screen, not only would you be able to send e-mails or messages, but also pay for online goods and enjoy the navigation services. In addition, this gadget (small device) can monitor the customer’s health and fitness. If you want to make the best of Apple Watch applications, you are recommended to own an iPhone. You can place an order for Apple Watch on April 10, which is expected to be put on the market in the United States and eight other countries on April 24, with prices between $349 and $10000.

【解析】

試題分析:本文是一篇產(chǎn)品信息類寫作,根據(jù)題目方框給出的信息,介紹蘋果公司的最新產(chǎn)品蘋果智能手表。【寫作要求】:只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。【評分標準】:句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章連貫。

亮點說明:本文內(nèi)容充實,把題目框給出的信息全部包含進去了,且嚴格按照了題目要求,用 5句話表達了全部內(nèi)容。本文使用了大量的長句,如使用到了with的伴隨狀語…,with prices between $349 and $10000.以及非限性定語從句…Apple Watch on April 10, which is expected to be …,同時還有本文第一句話等,這些是文章的一大亮點,是閱卷老師加分的重要標準,充分體現(xiàn)了作者扎實的英語基本功以及學以致用的能力;本文還使用了一些短語,如not only…but also…/in addition等,為文章增添了不少光彩。

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