Question

【題目】請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Ben John, May Ashworth's grandson, posted a picture of his grandma's search history on his Twitter. She was asking for a translation of the Roman figures MCMXCVIII.

“I asked my nan why she used” please “and” thank you “and it seemed she thinks that there is someone—a physical person—at Google's headquarters who looks after the searches. She thinks that by being polite and using her manners, the search would be quicker，” he said.

Hundreds of thousands of people have seen the Tweet and many have expressed how much they loved it.

參考詞匯：網(wǎng)絡(luò)禮儀digital etiquette

寫作內(nèi)容：

1. 用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 從網(wǎng)絡(luò)文明建設(shè)和個人素養(yǎng)提升兩個方面論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)禮儀的重要性；

3. 就如何提高公民網(wǎng)絡(luò)禮儀，提出切實可行的建議(至少兩點)。

寫作要求：

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標題。

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Answer 1

【答案】Ben John's grandma is found to ask Google Search in an extremely polite way, whose behavior is beyond the expectation of her grandson but fully appreciated by Google and many netizens. (31)

It goes without saying that social manners are of great significance in the virtual world. On the one hand, removing barriers in communication, the observation of digital etiquette helps create a harmonious and civilized network environment. On the other hand, how a person behaves when nobody knows who he is online, to a large extent, can reflect his genuine personality.

There is no simple solution to the promotion of digital etiquette. As for individuals, we cannot be too thoughtful about the contents we post online. Moreover, the authority concerned should enhance the supervision of the misbehaviors on the Internet. All in all, wherever we are, the principle that we should treat people the way we want to be treated should never be neglected. (123)

【解析】這是一篇議論文。文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出�？忌�在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：1. 通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。2. 要點齊全。但不能簡單羅列，應(yīng)使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然。3. 題目的大意是：Ben發(fā)現(xiàn)他的奶奶在用Google查詢時用了“請”、“謝謝”，因為奶奶覺得在Google的背后是有人在操作，禮貌用語可以讓查詢更快些，Ben便發(fā)了條twitter，這條twitter得到了Google的友善回應(yīng)。另外，在提建議時，分別從自身角度、國家角度來說，使表達清晰合理。

【范文亮點】

采用了is found to do(被發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事)，beyond the expectation of(超出預(yù)期)，be of great significance(非常重要)，to a large extent(很大程度上)，等高級單詞和短語。

此句用了定語從句，被動句和固定短語：All in all(總的來說), wherever we are, the principle that we should treat people the way we want to be treated should never be neglected.句式高級不俗套。此句用了狀語從句，賓語從句和how引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句：how a person behaves when nobody knows who he is online，句式多變，表達清晰。