【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號( ^ )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。

From the story of Anne Frank,I think that a best friend is someone to who we can tell everything,even our most person feelings and thoughts.Anne treated her diary as her the best friend.The German Nazis were in search of Anne and her family and they have to hide away from the chase.They didn’t dare go out even in the evenings.They had to stay indoors day or night.Anne missed the beauty of nature too much that she stayed up until eleven thirty one evening just to see the moonlight.She said,“This is the first time I had seen the moonlight since I was here.”Unfortunately,the family was discovered at last and take away.

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本文為記敘文。文章講述了安妮·弗蘭克的故事。

第一處：考查代詞。tell sth. to sb.“告訴某人某事”，to是介詞。此處為介詞加關(guān)系代詞的定語從句，應(yīng)使用關(guān)系代詞的賓格形式。故who改為whom。

第二處：考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞feelings and thoughts，意為“個人感受和想法”，應(yīng)使用形容詞。故person改為personal。

第三處：考查冠詞。當(dāng)中心詞前有形容詞性物主代詞修飾時，不使用冠詞。故去掉her后的the。

第四處：考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)句意可知，此處描述的是過去的動作，應(yīng)使用一般過去時。故have改為had。

第五處：考查dare的用法。根據(jù)句中didn’t可知，此處dare做實意動詞，后接不定式。故dare后加to。

第六處：考查連詞。固定短語：day and night“日以繼夜，一天到晚”。故or改為and。

第七處：考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。句意：她太想念大自然的美了，以至于有一天晚上她熬夜到11點半，就是為了看看月光。此處為so…that…“如此……以至于……”。故too改為so。

第八處：考查固定句型。It is the first time that…“這是第一次……”，從句謂語動詞要求使用現(xiàn)在完成時。故had改為have。

第九處：考查主謂一致。句意：不幸的是，這家人終于被發(fā)現(xiàn)并被帶走了。根據(jù)句意，此處family意為“家人”，謂語動詞應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故was改為were。

第十處：考查語態(tài)。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)使用過去分詞，構(gòu)成被動語態(tài)。故take改為taken。

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