Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你在美國的朋友David給你發(fā)來一封電子郵件，詢問你在暑假期間除了做家庭作業(yè)以外，還進行了什么有趣、有意義的活動。請你給他回一封電子郵件，向他介紹你在暑假期間的主要活動。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1．和同學(xué)及朋友觀看世界杯足球賽；

2．上輔導(dǎo)課(學(xué)習數(shù)學(xué)、物理、化學(xué))；

3．在餐館打工兩周，洗碗、洗菜；

4．到敬老院做義工(打掃衛(wèi)生、為老人讀報)。

注意：

1．不要逐條翻譯，可適當添加細節(jié)，詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．參考詞：輔導(dǎo)課training course 敬老院nursing home

Dear David,

Thanks for your email. Now I'd like to tell you something about my summer vacation.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

Thanks for your email. Now I'd like to tell you something about my summer vacation.

I finished my homework on time, which I think was the most important. Other than that, I did a lot of interesting things. As you know, the FIFA World Cup was held. I watched almost all the football matches with my friends and classmates. How about you? I also took training courses, including maths, physics and chemistry. I once worked for two weeks in a small restaurant near my home, where I washed dishes and vegetables. It was really a tiring job, but I think it was worthwhile since I could earn some money. I think my voluntary work in the nursing home was the most meaningful. I did some cleaning and read newspapers for the elderly there.

What did you do during your summer vacation? Please tell me in your next email.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，寫一封電子郵件。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用將來時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達語言流暢自然，層次分明，要點全面。作者首先開門見山提出寫信的目的。文中使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如定語從句which I think was the most important. that, I did a lot of interesting things、where I washed dishes and vegetables.和As you know。還有狀語從句since I could earn some money。還用了worthwhile, voluntary ,meaningful等高級詞匯。