Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

My father was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me on a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very luckily. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her. He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.

 

Answer 1

1.the ---a

2.was去掉

3.there--where

4.on---for

5.firefly---fireflies

6.seem后面加to

7.think--thinking

8.luckily ---lucky

9.her--him

10.helps—helped

【解析】

試題分析：本文作者回憶了父親給他的影響，表達(dá)了對(duì)父親的感激。父親是一個(gè)生物學(xué)教授，知識(shí)非常淵博。在作者小時(shí)候父親常常帶他去實(shí)驗(yàn)室和野外玩，在那里作者認(rèn)識(shí)了很多動(dòng)物，也培養(yǎng)了對(duì)大自然的愛。

1.考查冠詞。My father was the biology professor. 此處是指父親的職業(yè)，“他是一個(gè)教授”，不是特指概念，所以把the改為a。

2. 考查動(dòng)詞。When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab。Be used to do“被用來(lái)去做”，used to do“過(guò)去常�！�，通過(guò)句意可知此處指父親過(guò)去常常帶我去實(shí)驗(yàn)室，故把was去掉。

3.—where 考查關(guān)系副詞�！�…, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals。從結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，句子是主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，判斷用關(guān)系副詞，而先行詞是表示地點(diǎn)的詞，故把there改為where。

4. 考查介詞。He often took me on a walk in the backyard. 從語(yǔ)境可知父親常常帶我去后院散步，此處是表示目的，所以把on改為for。

5.firefly---fireflies 考查名詞。We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. Firefly是可數(shù)名詞，此處指類別，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把firefly改為fireflies。

6. 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。He seemed know everything about wildlife.。固定短語(yǔ)：seem to do sth“似乎做某事”，在seem后面加to。

7.—thinking 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life,…..從句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處是非謂語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，think和句子主語(yǔ)之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞，所以把think改為thinking。

8. 考查形容詞。I feel very luckily. Feel是系動(dòng)詞，后面應(yīng)該用形容詞做表語(yǔ)，把luckily改為lucky。

9..考查代詞。 I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her.根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容可知此處是指父親，對(duì)“我”的影響，所以把her改為him。

10.—helped 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me. 文章是回憶父親，全文都用的是過(guò)去時(shí)，所以把helps改為helped。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)