Question

【題目】假如你是張明，你的好朋友Jim面對即將到來的考試感到焦慮不已，晚上睡眠不好，嚴(yán)重影響了生活和學(xué)習(xí)，為此寫信向你求助。請根據(jù)以下要點，用英語給他回一封信。
1).表示理解；
2).制定復(fù)習(xí)計劃，樹立信心；
3).堅持鍛煉身體；睡前喝點牛奶,保持好的睡眠
4)....
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100字左右； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am sorry to hear that you feel so nervous before the coming exam that you can't sleep well at night. It affects your life and study greatly. I can understand your feelings. Don't worry and I'm writing to give you some suggestions.

First, it's necessary to make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second, you'd better do proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last, don't stay up late studying. Drink a glass of milk before you go to bed can improve your sleep. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.

I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.

Yours

Zhangming

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李明的身份給好朋友Jim寫一封信，寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1).表示理解；2).制定復(fù)習(xí)計劃，樹立信心；3).堅持鍛煉身體；睡前喝點牛奶,保持好的睡眠；4)....要注意書信的格式和特殊用詞。要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。