Question

17．綠色食品在人們的生活中變得越來(lái)越受歡迎，你們班就"人們是否應(yīng)該吃綠色食品"進(jìn)行了討論．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一篇文章，將你們的討論結(jié)果發(fā)表在某英文報(bào)上．

65%支持吃綠色食品	1．綠色食品種植、生產(chǎn)過(guò)程都是在無(wú)污染的環(huán)境下進(jìn)行的； 2．綠色食品不含對(duì)人體有害的農(nóng)藥．
35%不支持吃綠色食品	1．綠色食品生產(chǎn)成高，價(jià)格較高； 2．綠色食品多數(shù)大超市出售，購(gòu)買不是很方便．
你的觀點(diǎn)	…

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Should People Eat Green Food？
Recently our class had a discussion about whether people should eat green food．
About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
But 35% of the students think people shouldn't eat green food，since it is much more expensive．What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，people should eat green food if they can afford it．Why would they want to risk making themselves sick？．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果 
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)What's more而且；In my opinion在我看來(lái)；risk doing 冒險(xiǎn)做某事；Recently our class had a discussion on whether people should eat green food這個(gè)句子wheither引導(dǎo)on的賓語(yǔ)從句； Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safe to eat．這個(gè)句子making做伴隨狀語(yǔ)； 
About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）
Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）

解答 Should People Eat Green Food？
      Recently our class had a discussion about whether people should eat green food．
      About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
       But 35% of the students think people shouldn't eat green food，since it is much more expensive．What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）
      In my opinion，people should eat green food if they can afford it．Why would they want to risk making themselves sick？

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．