Question

7．假設(shè)你是李華．你的英國(guó)筆友John寫信告訴你近日他由于沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到很大影響．他十分焦慮．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給他寫一封回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．限制玩游戲的時(shí)間，把精力逐漸轉(zhuǎn)移到其他事情上；
2．規(guī)定起床和睡覺(jué)的時(shí)間，形成良好的作息習(xí)慣；
3．每天鍛煉半小時(shí)，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear John，
I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．
             ．
Yours sincerely，

Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一封回信，首先要明確要點(diǎn)所涉及的信息及關(guān)系，其次注意恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞，例如，firstly，secondly，thirdly或是比較復(fù)雜的，像是to begin with，then，finally．再次，句式的選擇．借助從句的應(yīng)用，讓閱卷人感覺(jué)應(yīng)試者有較為深厚的語(yǔ)法功底和極好的語(yǔ)言表現(xiàn)力．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
如要點(diǎn)中"限制玩游戲的時(shí)間"可以處理成you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games，"規(guī)定起床和睡覺(jué)的時(shí)間，形成良好的作息習(xí)慣；"可以處理成 you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly．以上均是借助從句的應(yīng)用，顯示出作者扎實(shí)的寫作功底．

解答 Dear John，
    I'm sorry to hear that you've addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．I know you worry about it very much．As a good friend，I'm willing to give you some advice．（寫信開(kāi)頭）
    Firstly，you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other things．（高分句型一）Secondly，you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly．（高分句型二）Thirdly，you should do exercise for about half an hour every day to strengthen your body．I do hope you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle．（提出建議）
                                                                                                                                  Best wishes!
                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．