Question

假如你是李華，學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)“有煩惱向誰說”的調(diào)查活動。請根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果用英語給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)的情況。并闡述你自己的看法。

Dear editor,
Recently our school has carried out a survey—to whom do you go when you are in trouble? The results are as follows:____________________________________________________________________
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Yours ,
Lihua

Answer 1

Dear editor,
Recently our school has carried out a survey--to whom do you go when in trouble? The results are as follows:
61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble. The
reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. 22% choose
teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences.
However, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of other’s
business and some of them find it hard to get along with others.
As for me, I prefer to deal with my troubles by myself first. When I am faced with troubles, seeking for various
ways to settle is my first step. Because sometimes troubles are not so troublesome or challenging as we expected,
they can be solved entirely with my efforts. I do like to experience the pleasure. Of course, sometimes I will also
turn to my parents or friends for help if the troubles are not within my ability.
Yours
Lihua  

試題分析：題目要求就一項(xiàng)調(diào)查活動的結(jié)果向校報(bào)編輯寫一封信。寫作要點(diǎn)以餅圖的形式呈現(xiàn)，選擇向同學(xué)、朋友說的占大多數(shù)，其次是向老師、父母說，少數(shù)選擇不向別人說。作文可以分為兩部分，一部分描述調(diào)查的結(jié)果；第二部分?jǐn)⑹鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)注意前后文的銜接，對調(diào)查結(jié)果的描述盡量客觀。
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