Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國好友Josh想了解你校學生課外活動開展情況。請你給他回信，內容應包括：

1.課外活動的意義；

2.課外活動的內容；

3.你最喜歡的課外活動及原因。

注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Josh,

Learning that you are interested in our school activities, I'd like to tell you some details.

To enrich students' school life and improve learning quality, our school provides us with varied and colorful after-class activities. We are encouraged to participate in such competitions as English speech and English dubbing, in which our interest and talent are fully developed.

Among all the activities, what pleases me most was visiting a packaging factory last year. I learned about the whole process of producing a cardboard box. It was also because of this experience that I understood the real meaning of labor creating life.

Could you tell me your school activities?

Yours,

Li Hu

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給你的英國好友Josh寫一封關于你校學生課外活動開展情況的回信。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時

結構：三段式。

第一段：提出寫信目的（tell some details）；

第二段：介紹課外活動的意義和內容（meaning and content）；

第三段：我最喜歡的課外活動及原因（My favorite after-class activity and reason）。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

be interested in,enrich,varied and colorful,be encouraged to do, the meaning of, provide…with, after-class activities

第三步：連詞成句

1. Learning that you are interested in our school activities, I'd like to tell you some details.

2. To enrich students' school life and improve learning quality, our school provides us with varied and colorful after-class activities.

3. We are encouraged to participate in such competitions as English speech and English dubbing, in which our interest and talent are fully developed.

4. Among all the activities, what pleases me most was visiting a packaging factory last year.

5. It was also because of this experience that I understood the real meaning of labor creating life.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改